Man I loved this!
This was so unique and creative. It's unreal. It was fantastic, and I really liked all the part alot.
My main critcism is that in MRat's part the intestine falling in the cave had alot of potential, and Coaly just sort of tossed it aside. I really wished the story could have progressed from there in that new direction.
Oh well, it lead to Swain's nice wrap-up, so it's not all bad.
My favourite part was Luis', of course, because the pilot walking on the plane wing was simply gorgeous. I really loved it.
Hoping to see more really soon. Maybe I'll even try out to get in the next one!